Giving up is merely quitting
Letting go is sweet release
Giving up is cries of anguish
Letting go is perfect peace
Giving up is hard and heavy
Letting go is loose and light
Giving up is simply failure
Letting go, success in sight
Giving up is very human
Letting go is most divine
Giving up is death at sundown
Letting go, the rising sun
Giving up is "There, it's over"
Letting go, "I've just begun!'
Beautiful intelligence. Poignant and well written. Uplifting and yet a reminder of the sadness.
Very good!